Tuesday, 17 March 2015

Week #5 (Part 2) The Pivotal: Critiquing! [Kanupreet Kapani]

Critical Appreciation: Criteria: -

1.   Word by word
2. Spelling and Grammar/ No Slang
3. Does your writing convey your ideas effectively? (Yes or No) Describe how and why?

4. Gestalt/ Wholeness: how well does the title and content both visually and textually compliment each other?

I am critiquing the first part of my Week #4 blog…

My blog post is structured and easy to understand with well-described emotions. Also, there’s good use of words and vocabulary. The study of most parameters in the selected set up is wide and the same is evident in my blog.
My writing conveys my ideas pretty effectively. However, better sentence formation and use of better vocabulary could have made the blog post more interesting for the readers. Also, there’s no use of slangs with correct grammar and spellings. There's also enough visual content along with the text that makes it interactive, interesting and more appealing to look at. As told by our teacher herself, the balance between visual and textual makes people want to read our group's blog! In addition, the color scheme used is bright and readable.

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